It's been a while, both since I posted my
response about
The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe and since I reread
Prince Caspian in preparation for this one. Blame the holidays and a bout of stomach flu that hit our house. Anyway, here we are now, ready to return to Narnia after a year/about a thousand years/whatever.
Here is the blog post on tor.com to which I will be responding, and again, you might want to read her comments before reading mine, since I'll be answering them without repeating them.
For this book, it would perhaps make more sense to describe the planetary character before we get into things. As LWW was a Jovial book, full of the character of the astrological Jupiter,
Prince Caspian is a Martial book, built around the theme of Mars; or I should say, the themes of Mars, since there are two. Mars began as a god of vegetation, of growing things, especially trees. This is why the month of March was named after him, the only month to be named after a planet. It was only later that he became a god of war. Lewis considers him under both of these characters.
This tension between life and death, growing and destroying, may be one of the reasons the book is (as Lewis admitted) the weakest of the seven Chronicles. It was also probably difficult for him to portray the theme of war in a way that children could understand and even enjoy; a tall order for a sophomore effort. And any writer of a sequel, a series, or a television show faces the challenge of making a story connected to the established story but not the same. Lewis gets better at this as he goes along, but this story is his first attempt, and rather fails. "Things never happen the same way twice," Aslan tells Lucy; and yet, a lot of the same things happen in PC as in LWW. The Pevensies are all pulled into Narnia, which is under the reign of a tyrannical usurper. Lucy sees something that none of the others do, and is disbelieved until proven right. Everyone winds up at the Hill of the Stone Table. The boys and girls are split up, the girls staying with Aslan while the boys fight an important battle against the tyrant. Aslan and the girls bring in surprise reinforcements that turn the tide of the battle into a Narnian victory. A new ruler is crowned. The four Pevensies return to England, having left something of our world back in Narnia. The way all these things happen is different, of course, but the similar story structure can make those differences rather jarring.
Most differences have to do with the difference between Jupiter and Mars, that is, the difference between kingship and knighthood. For of course, Lewis the medieval man filtered war through the lens of knighthood, with all the chivalry and courtesy that came with it. Unfortunately, there are many, many similarities between a good king and a good knight. Peter demonstrates this at the single combat when he spares Miraz' life, and Edmund grumbles, "Comes of being a knight
and a High King." Both aspects would motivate him to mercy.
So what is a good knight, according to
Prince Caspian and the character of Mars? One major aspect is orderly obedience. Everyone has his place in the ranks and defends it to the best of his ability. The subordinates don't seek to subvert their leaders, and the leaders don't seek to abandon their responsibilities. Trumpkin is a prime example, as even when he disagrees with his superior officer, he'll still follow and obey him. Another important aspect is courage, which is defined not only as facing one's fears, but as doing what is right even when it's very hard. We see this in countless ways, portrayed by Caspian, the Pevensies, Trumpkin, Doctor Cornelius--pretty much all the good characters, Susan being the least receptive to the Martial spirit but catching on eventually. ("You have listened to fears, child....Are you braver now?" "A little, Aslan.") And just as the White Witch was the antithesis to Jovial joy, with her stoic and deadening winter, here the Telmarines are the antithesis to Martiality (if that's a word). Instead of faithfully keeping their places in the ranks, Glozelle and Sopespian scheme against Miraz, convincing him to join single combat through fear of being thought a coward, and eventually murdering him. Miraz himself is a usurper, coming to the throne through treachery and murder. He rules in a large part through fear, as Cornelius explains to Caspian about the Black Woods: The Telmarine kings fear the sea because Aslan comes over it, so they let the trees grow up to cut off the coast. "But because they have quarrelled with the trees, they are afraid of the woods" and imagine them full of ghosts, encouraging their people to believe the same, because they're also afraid of what might happen if the people started making friends with the trees, the sea, and all that they represent.
Now to the response. First of all, yes, the Telmarines don't like Miraz either, but again, their culture is full of treachery and fear. Caspian didn't just want to take his rightful place as king; he wanted to take it in the right way, turning his back on all that the Telmarine kings have done for many generations. That would indeed be considerably harder.
"[H]is route to the throne is not at all clear": this might be another instance of Lewis working in the aspects of Mars. In war, things are often unclear, and the only thing the soldier or the knight can do is make the best decision possible with the situation presented to him. Also, Caspian is still a very young prince, forced into this situation by necessity (another word that Lewis associated with Mars; see
Planet Narnia, chapter four). He's not a very good commander yet, which is why he needs the aid of the more experienced kings Peter and Edmund, and of his great Commander-in-Chief, Aslan.
Bacchus, the Maenads, and Silenus. Those were always a weird part of the story to me, too. Michael Ward makes a brief connection in
Planet Narnia with the month of March, during which, in ancient Rome, the Bacchanalia occurred after a festival in honor of Mars. This is a loose connection at best, and perhaps another weakness in the Chronicle, but the revelers are more sturdily rooted in the story (lol) by their association with plant life. They are quintessentially wild, like the untamed forest, and their function in the story is mainly to remove all the unnecessary/unwanted restrictions that the Telmarines have put in place: Beruna's Bridge (which the river-god calls "my chains"), a school where falsehood is taught, a man beating a boy, etc. They serve as a reminder that, although the Martial spirit is one of orderly obedience and hard necessity, those things are means rather than ends; means to abundant life, peace, friendship, and joy. (P.s.: Glozelle and Sopespian, as I said above, are not just there to help out the plot, or to save the children from being murderers, but to portray the general character of the bad guys as anti-Martial.)
Oh, yes. The next paragraph is one that I can hardly disagree with. The flashback method is confusing and makes it harder to totally immerse in the story. This may be one of the reasons for the book's poorer quality, and is probably connected with Lewis' desire to change things up a bit for the sequel.
No moral depth? On the contrary. Courage (as a few people have said) is not just one of the virtues, but is what is needed for any of the virtues to become strong. It's easy to have love, or gratitude, or self-control, or faith, when everything is going well for us. It's when things get hard, when the going gets tough, that we see how strong those virtues really are in us. The whole journey for Caspian and the other children (and Trumpkin, to some extent) is a lesson in courage, in doing the hard, necessary, right thing. Indeed, faith and disbelief may be studied almost the hardest here.
The Last Battle is definitely the most in-depth journey of faith without sight, but Lucy's trial with her unseeing siblings is a great example to the Christian of the duty of witnessing even to the stubborn unbeliever, trusting that God will work through our obedience even if we don't see results right away. It takes courage for Lucy to "stick to her guns", and at first, she doesn't. It's something she has to learn. And the others change, too; the boys harden into warriors after the hard journey to Aslan's How, and Susan eventually admits how wrong she was and submits to Aslan's influence.
The worst consequence of disbelief is not just "a day's delay and exile to a tropical island". Those were the consequences meant to teach Aslan's children and to reward those who trusted his promises, respectively. How about the man who turned into a tree? The class full of boys who apparently turned into pigs? (Interestingly, it was apparently their fear that accomplished the latter transformation.) And think about the other two kinds of Telmarines who stayed in Narnia. Some were like Caspian and were glad that the Old Days had come again. They were on Aslan's side and probably became well-loved citizens of Narnia. But those who didn't like the new order of things, nor trust Aslan to give them a new country, must have been miserable the rest of their lives. Imagine a Nazi, or a member of the KKK, being forced to live in Africa. Caspian wouldn't have put up with them trying to assert their "rights" over his other subjects for a minute. Most of these probably ended up in prison or banished, or leaving the country voluntarily, as Pittencream does later in VDT.
On the subject of humans ruling the animals, see the previous post in this series, on kingship and the order of creation as Lewis saw it. Also, consider this: all or most of the animals we see have their own particular prejudices. The Bulgy Bears want to have dinner first and council afterwards; the squirrels want everyone to eat and talk at the same time; the mice want to storm Miraz' castle right away; the moles want to dig trenches all over the place; the fauns and satyrs want to start with a dance; later, in SC, the owls have all their meetings at night; etc. A Centaur might be a good choice for a ruler to tie all these disparate races together, but Narnian Centaurs have their own job of stargazing and prophecy. (Dwarfs tend to be racial supremacists, as in the case of Nikabrik and the Dwarfs of
The Last Battle.) A human king, ruling under the guidance of the animal-yet-divine Aslan, can know what's best for all.
Trumpkin's doubt of the Pevensies' abilities is another way Lewis shows that he (Trumpkin, that is) is not quite in tune with Aslan's Martial influence. A soldier obeys his commanding officer, even if he doesn't think much of him. Trumpkin realizes this under Caspian, but has trouble accepting the authority of the four Kings and Queens from England. In part, this is because their authority comes from Aslan, in whom Trumpkin also disbelieves until proven wrong. His skepticism is another way the issue of faith is explored, and reminds me of the character of MacPhee in
That Hideous Strength, whom the leader of the faithful company describes affectionately as "our skeptic" and the best man you could have on your side in a losing battle. His loyalty and faith are not easy to win, but nearly impossible to lose once gained. And when Trumpkin does believe in who the Pevensies are, he steps in and reminds them whenever they start to forget who they are in Narnia; their place in the ranks. Peter would rather not have to make a decision; "You are the High King," Trumpkin points out. If anyone has to make tough choices, it's the leader. Susan obstreperously declines to follow Aslan in the middle of the night, even when everyone else is doing so; "Obey the High King, your Majesty," says Trumpkin, "and let's be off." Trumpkin doesn't believe it, either, but he knows the difference between giving advice and taking orders, which shows how he's somewhat receptive to Aslan even before coming to faith.
Susan, as I have said, is the least receptive to the Martial influence in this book. Because of the theme of facing hardship hardily, the result is that Susan is quite the "wet-blanket", complaining more than anyone else and refusing to obey her older brother/High King or Lucy's vision of Aslan. She's not completely useless, as she takes the initiative to rescue Trumpkin at the beginning of the story and uses her shooting skills to prove her identity as Queen. We're told that archery and swimming are the things she's good at. But talent alone is not enough. Being on Aslan's side is about commitment and loyalty, even when things don't go smoothly, and Susan apparently can't handle that. Is this one reason she turns her back on Narnia in LB? Maybe.
Nobody seems to learn anything in this book? Really? See the above paragraph on "moral depth". I would say all four Pevensies learn a great deal about holding onto faith and making the right choice when it's hardest. Maybe it's not as clear as it should be (another result of the confusing story structure?), but studying
Prince Caspian under the character of Mars made it very clear to me. (No comment on the shortness of the trip, except to note that when peace has come, the knights can return home, unlike kings whose jobs are never over.)
On the subject of Peter and Susan leaving Narnia, it's impossible to say much from this book because it doesn't say much about it (another case of obeying orders even when they're difficult to understand). We get much better closure in VDT when Aslan speaks to Edmund and Lucy about not coming back. There, Aslan explains that as they get older, they "must begin to come close to [their] own world" and that the reason they were brought to Narnia was to know him better here. I'll talk more about this in the next post, of course, dealing with the book it appears in; but for now, let me just note that Aslan/Christ is the creator of both of these worlds, and He would have put the Pevensies in this world for a purpose, just as He had a purpose in sending them to Narnia temporarily. We're not told much about what Peter and Susan (nor Edmund and Lucy) began to do in our world once their adventures in Narnia ended, but if they began to follow Jesus with the same commitment they had to Aslan, one can see how that would have been life-changing. Unfortunately, it seems Susan didn't, as far as we know. But anything might have happened after the events of LB, which I will address in their proper place. They will have a lot to do with this "too old for fairy tales" concept that keeps coming up.
And now to get specifically Christian. What is Christian about war? you may ask. Much, the Bible answers. Its pages are full of physical and spiritual battles, in which many a true believer must take part as his (or her) duty. Several of these battles, like that of
Prince Caspian, are wars of deliverance against wicked tyrants. In no place is this truer than in the Christian's spiritual warfare against the forces of darkness. Satan has taken over this world, and our job is to "resist him, steadfast in the faith", as Caspian and his ragtag band continue to resist Miraz even in the worst of circumstances. However, in the current stage of our warfare, our struggle is not with flesh and blood (as, for example, the Israelites against the Philistines) but against the spiritual hosts of wickedness in the heavenly places. Therefore, the weapons of our warfare are not physical, but spiritual, and are listed famously in Ephesians 6. And one of the main ways we defeat our spiritual enemy is simply by being faithful through hard times, like the persecuted saints in Revelation who overcame "by the blood of the Lamb, by the word of their testimony, and because they did not love their lives to the death." This is what we call martyrdom, and it doesn't always have to involve literal physical death. A martyr is literally a witness, and witnesses to the truth no matter how others respond. Dante, in the
Paradiso, puts martyrs in the sphere of Mars, possibly for other reasons, but it might be that he understood witness as warfare. And Lewis in many places expressed strongly his views on the uneven dualism of the universe. He believed no one could remain neutral; all of life is choosing between one side and the other, and then fighting for that side, whether you know it or not.
Where does Aslan, or Christ, fit into all of this? Not only is He the Commander-in-Chief of our forces, but He is also the brave knight who has already won the decisive victory and directs all things to His ultimate conquest, which will bring peace throughout the world. We fight because we have assurance in Him that the war will someday be over, and He and His will be victorious. Our circumstances, however difficult, cannot change that. Let the enemy trick us, hurt us, torture us, and even kill us; if we are on the Winner's side, we have already won. We are "more than conquerors" through Him. Not only does His victory motivate us, but it enables us to do our part and fight our personal battles faithfully. That armor listed in Ephesians 6? It's the armor of God. He's the source of our strength and courage. He is also our example of fighting technique, and the Old and New Testaments are full of exhortations to be like the God who has rescued us from the enemy and made us His people. It's a tall order, but He is always with us to help us, even when it may not seem like it.
There is so much in these books, especially when you start delving into the planetary themes and Christian meanings. It is very impressive, at least to me, that Lewis was able to communicate so much in such simple language, that a child can understand it, but an adult will understand it much more. That's why these posts are going to be very long. That, and I'm just a long-winded person. :)
Whew! See you next time, on a voyage to the sun!